Saturday, November 13, 2010

Final Version






Thanks for everyone's help.  This is the final version of my class assignment.

9 comments:

  1. Wow...big improvement....it pops and recedes where it should!

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  2. I'm no good at critiquing art but I can now see that you have taken on board the advice that was given to you and think it looks great, even though I thought the previous drawing was great. These 2 girls particularly the one facing has a story to tell, I can imagine all sorts about her.

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  3. Really wonderful. I think it is much improved by just getting in some good darks!

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  4. Should have said: best of luck with your critique!

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  5. Great piece. Not only the actual drawing but the sentiment behind it, too. Very well done.

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  6. I think I got a good critique today. The glare at the bottom left was questionable and the teacher said maybe the older figure was too 3 dimensional. I'm not sure what she meant by that, I didn't really think she was but I think THAT is a difference in opinion.

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  7. Update on this... I sold it to the grandmother of the models. Nice! She framed it and gave it as a wedding gift to the older girl.

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